A Letter to the Director of the School to Complaint about the Course IELTS General Writing Task 1

Jul 19, 2022

A Letter to the Director of the School to Complaint about the Course IELTS General Writing Task 1 is a letter writing topic. Candidates are asked to write a formal letter. Each of the three sample responses contains an introduction, a body, and a conclusion in three paragraphs. The letter must be brief and to the point.
For IELTS General Writing Task 1, letters can be written in formal, informal, or semi-formal styles. The candidates must complete the task in 20 minutes. Students can consider their preparation for the writings section from the IELTS Writing Practice Papers and enhance their writing skills effectively. IELTS writing score is marked based on band scores. The band scores range from 0 to 9.

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Topic: You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course.

You should say :

Describe the course you are taking.
Explain what you don’t like about the course.
Give your opinion about what should be done about it

Model Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam
It is in reference to a course that I am taking at your evening school. As I am inquisitive about the latest technology trends, I had decided to enroll in the Artificial Intelligence course taught in your school. I have been a part of this course for some weeks now but I noticed that the curriculum covers the basics alone.
I have an immense interest in Artificial intelligence and its future prospects. The course being taught is not in detail. The basics that are being taught are easily accessible via the internet and I had already brushed up on these.
I request you to kindly revise the curriculum of the course, and add the current trends in Artificial Intelligence. And also the future aspects related to AI. It would make the course more thorough and pique the interest of the students even more.
I am looking forward to your support in the matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Karim

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Model Answer 2

Dear Sir/Madam,
I would firstly like to thank you for the plethora of interesting courses that are taught at your evening school. Being a technology enthusiast I have enrolled in the Machine learning courses being taught at your school. However, after attending a few classes I was disappointed by what is being taught.
The content that is being taught is outdated and obsolete. I am looking for future career prospects in Machine learning which is why I had decided to enroll in the course. After attending a few lectures, I was not as satisfied with the contents of the course.
The course hardly covers any of the latest information. Instead, it is wrapped around the basics of Machine Learning which are easily obtainable through the internet. The course also fails to highlight the key areas where Machine Learning can opt in the future.
Besides, the contents being taught are outdated. I request you to kindly look into the matter and revise the curriculum of the course. It would be beneficial if you could add a few more things to the course. Such as the upcoming trends in Machine Learning, how Machine Learning is advantageous, and a project to culminate the course. I believe it would be beneficial for everyone attending the course.
I am looking forward to your positive support in the matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Shristi

Model Answer 3

Hello Sir/Mam
With great dismay, I would like to point out that one of the courses being taught at your evening school is not up to the mark. I am an IT professional and have enrolled in a Python course being taught at your evening school. I had earlier completed a few other software courses at your evening school which were outstanding and extremely beneficial.
It is my second week of attending this course. The teachers are undoubtedly knowledgeable but not able to deliver the lectures accordingly. The foremost reason for this is the lack of good communication skills. Being a Tamilian, I do not understand Hindi as much and the entire is being taught by the faculty in Hindi. It is leading to my lack of interest in the course. Subsequently, there is no proper knowledge transfer as I am able to understand the bits and parts of the course.
I request you to kindly look into the matter and allocate a faculty that can teach in English. As a couple of my classmates are also from Southern India, I believe it will be beneficial for them as well.
I am hoping for your substantial support in the matter.
Yours sincerely,
Vignesh

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